Archive for May, 2010

Five Minute Fiction a Fixture!

Sunday, May 30th, 2010

We’re going to do it, this Tuesday. Will you be there?

Last week’s was fun, and satisfied all the writerly needs for the impatient writer. It’s a timed contest. At 1:30 pm EST I give the prompt and you have five minutes to write your entry and submit it. There’s a buffer of ten minutes to make sure you got a chance to get here and didn’t have technical difficulties. But it’s fast and furious and a winner is declared before the day’s end.

We’ll all tweet about the winner because this is about fame and fortune(ish) for the impatient, adventurous, and brave!

Seriously, how can you resist when it only takes five minutes of your time?

Come join us on Tuesday at 1:30pm EST (new time to accommodate PST).

Want a real challenge? Tweet this or share it on Facebook so there will be even more victims to show up with your superior writing skills.

Be there or be square.

A Writer’s Prayer

Friday, May 28th, 2010

If you’re a writer, you’ll know exactly what I’m talking about. A Haiku about querying agents.

Today I sent you
my hopes, dreams, blood, tears and pray

love it as I do?

May I Have the Free Books Please? Pretty Please?

Thursday, May 27th, 2010

WooHoo! I love free stuff. On her blog, Anne Riley is running a Summer Book Giveaway.

Yay! Check it out:

So, what books can you win?

Well let me just tell you!

The Maze Runner by James Dashner.

A teenage boy, Thomas, wakes up in a giant maze with no idea how he got there or who all the boys around him are. He can’t remember who is family is or anything about himself, except for his first name.

Once a month for two years, a new boy has shown up in the maze and joined the strange society that has developed there – but then a girl appears, and Thomas feels like he somehow knows her from somewhere…

Even as the Maze seems to prove itself more unsolvable with each passing day, Thomas is determined to become a Runner and find a way out – even if it means risking death for all of them.


The Forest of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan.


It’s been generations since the world was taken over by the “Unconsecrated” – the living dead that inhabit the Forest outside of Mary’s village. Her father has already been taken, and when her mother follows in his footsteps, Mary is left with only the Sisterhood to turn to.

Now, she’s learning things she never wanted to know about the Sisterhood and its secrets, and the village Guardians’ power. And when the fence around the village is breached and her world is thrown into chaos, she learns even more about the Unconsecrated and their relentlessness.

Now she must make a decision that will affect her future forever… Could there be life outside the walls of the village? Is there anything beyond the forest?

Incarceron by Catherine Fisher.

Even though Finn has been inside the prison for as long as he can remember, he somehow thinks that maybe he came from Outside – although this is supposed to be impossible.

Claudia, daughter of the Warden of Incarceron, is trapped outside the prison by a society that forbids change. She lives in a 17th century world even though it is centuries later. Betrothed to a man she cannot stand,
Claudia must find a way out of the marriage.

Neither knows the other exists… until they each find a crystal key that allows them to communicate. And when Claudia discovers that Incarceron – a prison so massive it houses forests, cities, and seems to have no end – is not the paradise it was supposed to be, she is determined to rescue her new friend Finn – but she has to find the prison first.

By Anne Riley


Now I haven’t read these yet, but I want to. I’ll be entering the contest. Get thee over there and enter too! And while you’re at it, become a follower of her blog. Just ’cause I said so. Well, that and it’s a great blog.

I Know You Are But What Am I?

Thursday, May 27th, 2010

There are as many ways to write as there are writers.

I write because it’s there, and I write when it’s there.
I generally require some sort of inspiration but then I’m off.
Planning is the death of my muse, so I just sit down and start going and even I don’t know what’s going to happen until it happens.

This is a fun way to write. It’s play not work. But it’s terrible for regularity and productivity. On the one hand, I can get caught up in a scene or even entire story, and I do little but write for days on end. And then I get it out of my system, have no particularly enticing idea waiting in the wings, and won’t write for days or even weeks!

It’s not the proper way to write, or so I’m told. But it’s how I write.

Are you a writer? How do you approach it? How do you work through the drawbacks of your method?

Check out the poll on the right and add your comments below.

Short Story: Not Every Victory is Sweet

Wednesday, May 26th, 2010

A powerful snap sounded in the air above her and Sarah fell to her knees.  Warm blood trickled down her chin from where she’d bit her lip and her body trembled with the effort of staying upright and silent.

“Vara,” she said, and winced at the quiver in her voice.  He would be unhappy about that.  “A base of Vara and then Mera and Tala in equal amounts combined and activated by a quick burst of Taan.”

“Correct,” he said, his voice too loud to ears over-sensitive from the assault of magic-noise.

Relief washed over her.  She had correctly identified the composition of the spell he had used on her.  He hadn’t said she’d done well.  He wouldn’t say that.  But correct meant she had not been wrong, and correct meant she would not be punished.

She stood with an effort.  Her legs felt like jelly but she willed them to support her.  She wouldn’t use magic to lend herself strength or ease the pain.  One of the worst punishments she ever received had been for doing that.

There had been times, so very rare that sometimes she was sure she’d dreamed them, when he had soothed her as her body twitched with pain.  Only when she had not failed.  When she failed, he hurt her, coldly vicious, and stood over her as she whimpered.

“You know the purpose of that spell?” he asked.

“Yes, the initial strike of pain weakens and disables and if maintained the pain would intensify and cause death in time.”

“How much time?”

“It would depend on many factors but it would not be quick.”

“But the noise?”

“You added that, it’s unnecessary.”

He didn’t speak for a time.  She knew she was right.  She had too much practice and too much fear of failure to be wrong.  And her body still trembled with the magic essences and the pain of it.  But his silence was always frightening, and he needed no excuse to hurt her.

“You are correct.  Now you will apply what you have learned.  Tonight, when his watch has ended, you will meet him as you planned and you will kill him with this spell.”

She dropped her eyes, though she knew he would see the tears.  They would please him.

“Yes, Matthew.”

“You may go.”

She dropped into a curtsy and left the room.  In her own bedroom, with the door closed, a wave of pain such as she’d never known stabbed through her breast and she fell, quivering, to the floor.  For once, it wasn’t a punishment inflicted.

Despair was more painful than anything they had ever done to her.

*******

Moonlight streamed through the window of the tower room where she met him.  He was watching through the window – for her, no doubt – when she opened the door.  He looked up and his whole face lit with a smile.  Another piece of what little was left of Sarah withered and died.

She had known, hadn’t she, that they would find out eventually?  That she had a lover of her own choosing because she wanted someone who held her and kissed her and took her because he wanted to be with her and not because she was being trained in this as well.

He was such a beautiful boy, and so young.  Probably only three years older than she was in physical age but decades younger in all the ways that mattered.  It was one of the things she loved about him.  The curve of youth still on his cheek and the innocence in his eyes.

He came toward her and his arms went around her waist and he buried his face in her hair.

“Oh, darling,” he murmured.

She didn’t allow her body to betray her.  She melted into his embrace even though she wanted to push him away, to scream at him to run and never come back.

She lifted her face to his and kissed him tenderly.  He looked down at her with such wonder, such worship on his face.

She brought her lips to his again.  “I love you,” she murmured, her lips whispering against his.

He stiffened and pulled back just enough that she could see his face.  His eyes were wide.

And why not, at such a shocking declaration?  She was young, and beautiful, and heir to lands and titles and fortunes.  And what was he?

He was dead.

His body slid to the floor with the gracefulness she’d loved in him.  The life in his eyes was already gone.  It had been very quick.  She was accurate in everything she did.

She slid her knife from his breast and wiped it clean on her own skirt.  All of the other times she had used the clothes of her victim and what did it matter to them?  But this time it mattered, to her.

Matthew would make her pay for this, make her howl until she had no more voice and still he would hurt her.  She hadn’t failed, she had defied him.

She could have made the boy suffer, as she’d been told.  She could have made him die slowly and in terrible pain.  She knew she was capable of it.  So there was some victory in this.  That she had killed her lover quickly and painlessly not out of weakness, but by choice.

She stood and looked down at him.

One tear escaped and she brushed it away, not realizing that she’d replaced the tear track with a smear of his blood.

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